Practice 01 · Health
Agenda · 90 minutes
Learning Objectives
Discussion · Task 2 Academic
Đề thực tế Cambridge IELTS 17-19: 12/16 đề Task 2 là Opinion hoặc Discussion. Nhựt nắm 2 dạng này = chuẩn bị đủ 75% kỳ thi.
Four Question Types · Task 2 Academic
Tín hiệu nhận diện Discussion: "Some people believe X, while others think Y. Discuss both views" — chữ "both" là khoá. Nếu thiếu chữ "both", có thể là Opinion lite.
Four-paragraph structure · Discussion essay
Tỷ lệ vàng Discussion: 20% / 31% / 33% / 16%. Body 2 dài hơn Body 1 vì còn chứa opinion. Không viết Body 3.
Stance spectrum · Three positions
Quy tắc vàng Discussion: thesis = câu cuối Intro. Phải nêu lập trường rõ ràng — KHÔNG "it depends" trống không. Balanced ≠ trung lập; vẫn phải nói "depend on what".
Topic Sentence + PEEL · Discussion body framework
| Stage | Function | Example phrase (Discussion) |
|---|---|---|
| P · Point | Topic sentence — report view (Body 1 trung tính, Body 2 + opinion ở cuối) | Body 1: "Proponents of X argue that…" / Body 2: "On the other hand, supporters of Y contend that…" |
| E · Evidence | Ví dụ cụ thể hậu thuẫn view đang trình bày | "A frequently cited example is the case of…" / "Recent OECD data shows that…" |
| E · Explain | Giải thích cơ chế nhân-quả vì sao evidence hậu thuẫn view | "This demonstrates that …" / "Such a pattern reflects …" |
| L · Link | Body 1: link sang Body 2 trung tính. Body 2: link sang opinion câu chốt. | Body 1: "Despite this, the opposing view also merits attention." / Body 2 (opinion): "On balance, the first argument strikes me as more convincing because…" |
Khác Opinion essay: Body 1 KHÔNG nêu opinion. Tone trung tính "they argue / proponents say". Opinion chỉ xuất hiện ở câu cuối Body 2.
Reporting Phrasebank · Discussion specific
Reporting view
Contrast & balance
Tránh "I think" lặp lại 3+ lần. Discussion đặc biệt cần phrasebank này vì có 2 view phải report — 1 từ "argue" lặp 4 lần = giám khảo trừ Lexical Resource.
Exam Sequence · 40-minute budget
Practice 01 · Health
Task · Discussion · Healthcare funding
"Some people believe that healthcare should be provided free of charge by the government, while others argue that individuals should be responsible for paying for their own medical treatment. Discuss both views and give your own opinion."
Source · Common exam topic 2023-2024
Gạch chân: healthcare · free of charge · government · individuals · responsible · paying. 6 từ khoá phải xuất hiện (paraphrased) trong Intro.
Step 1 · Plan two views + stance · 5 phút
Reason: Equity — đảm bảo ai cũng được khám bệnh không phụ thuộc thu nhập.
Example: UK NHS, Canada Medicare — bao phủ toàn dân, life expectancy cao.
Reason: Free-rider problem — miễn phí dễ lạm dụng; thị trường tạo cạnh tranh.
Example: Singapore co-payment model — cân bằng giữa subsidies và personal stake.
Opinion (cuối Body 2): Lean A — equity argument vượt trội vì healthcare khác hàng hoá thông thường (life-or-death, info asymmetry).
Step 2 · Paraphrase + announce 2 views + thesis · 5 phút
Câu đề gốc
"Healthcare should be provided free of charge by the government, while others argue that individuals should be responsible for paying…"
Paraphrased · Band 6.5
"Whether the state ought to bear the cost of medical care or whether such expenses should rest on the individual is a debate that divides modern societies."
Intro hoàn chỉnh · Hook + 2 views + Thesis · 56 từ
IntroWhether the state ought to bear the cost of medical care or whether such expenses should rest on the individual is a debate that divides modern societies. Proponents of universal coverage cite fairness, while supporters of private funding emphasise efficiency. This essay will examine both positions and will argue that government-funded healthcare is, on balance, the more justifiable model.
Cấu trúc 3 câu: hook + 2 view (1 câu) + thesis lean A (1 câu). KHÔNG đẩy thesis sang Body 2 — phải xuất hiện ở Intro.
Step 3 · Body 1 · View A · government-funded · 6 phút
Body 1Proponents of state-funded healthcare argue that medical treatment is a fundamental right rather than a commodity, and therefore should be detached from a patient's ability to pay. Under this view, allowing the market to allocate care would leave low-income groups dangerously exposed, since serious illness rarely waits for one's salary to accommodate it. A frequently cited example is the United Kingdom's National Health Service, which provides cradle-to-grave coverage without charging at the point of use. This system, despite recent strain, has helped sustain one of the highest life-expectancy figures in Europe. Such evidence lends weight to the claim that universal access is both ethically defensible and demographically effective.
Step 4 · Body 2 · View B + opinion lean A · 6 phút
Body 2On the other hand, supporters of user-paid systems contend that personal financial responsibility curbs over-use and rewards healthier lifestyles. They point to the so-called free-rider problem: when treatment is free, patients may consult doctors over trivial complaints, lengthening waiting lists for the genuinely sick. Singapore's hybrid co-payment model — where citizens contribute through Medisave accounts while the state subsidises catastrophic costs — is often cited as proof that mixed funding yields both efficiency and discipline. While this argument has practical force, I find the equity case stronger, because illness is rarely a matter of personal choice and an individual's life chances should not be auctioned to the highest bidder.
Sample Essay · Band 6.5 · 272 words
IntroWhether the state ought to bear the cost of medical care or whether such expenses should rest on the individual is a debate that divides modern societies. Proponents of universal coverage cite fairness, while supporters of private funding emphasise efficiency. This essay will examine both positions and will argue that government-funded healthcare is, on balance, the more justifiable model.
Body 1Proponents of state-funded healthcare argue that medical treatment is a fundamental right rather than a commodity, and therefore should be detached from a patient's ability to pay. Under this view, allowing the market to allocate care would leave low-income groups dangerously exposed, since serious illness rarely waits for one's salary to accommodate it. A frequently cited example is the United Kingdom's National Health Service, which provides cradle-to-grave coverage without charging at the point of use. This system, despite recent strain, has helped sustain one of the highest life-expectancy figures in Europe. Such evidence lends weight to the claim that universal access is both ethically defensible and demographically effective.
Body 2On the other hand, supporters of user-paid systems contend that personal financial responsibility curbs over-use and rewards healthier lifestyles. They point to the so-called free-rider problem: when treatment is free, patients may consult doctors over trivial complaints. Singapore's hybrid co-payment model — where citizens contribute through Medisave accounts while the state subsidises catastrophic costs — is often cited as proof that mixed funding yields both efficiency and discipline. While this argument has practical force, I find the equity case stronger, because illness is rarely a matter of personal choice and an individual's life chances should not be auctioned to the highest bidder.
ConclusionIn conclusion, although the user-paid model carries real efficiency benefits, the moral weight of universal access prevails. Healthcare, in my view, belongs in the category of public goods that no decent society should ration by wallet.
Language analysis · Discussion · lean A
Cấu trúc "X is a debate that divides modern societies" là template hook mở bài hữu dụng cho mọi đề Discussion — học một lần, dùng nhiều dạng.
Vocabulary & Paraphrase · Health
Practice 02 · Crime
Task · Discussion · Prisons & rehabilitation
"Some people argue that the main aim of prisons should be to punish offenders, while others believe rehabilitation is more effective in reducing future crime. Discuss both views and give your own opinion."
Source · Cambridge IELTS 18 · variant
Đề có cụm "more effective in reducing future crime" — gợi ý measurable outcome → cần đem evidence định lượng (recidivism rate) khi report view B.
Step 1 · Plan two views + stance · 5 phút
Reason: Deterrence — án nặng làm người khác sợ phạm tội; nạn nhân cần thấy công lý được thực thi.
Example: Singapore's strict sentencing → tỷ lệ tội phạm thấp; nạn nhân được "moral closure".
Reason: Recidivism — nhà tù trừng phạt thuần tuý tạo "trường đại học tội phạm"; cải tạo phá vòng lặp.
Example: Norway's Halden Prison — recidivism ~20% (so với US 60%), tù nhân học nghề.
Opinion (cuối Body 2): Lean B — measurable outcome (recidivism) rõ ràng hơn argument cảm tính về công lý; xã hội an toàn hơn về dài hạn.
Step 2 · Paraphrase + announce 2 views + thesis · 5 phút
Câu đề gốc
"Some argue the main aim of prisons should be to punish offenders, while others believe rehabilitation is more effective…"
Paraphrased · Band 6.5
"There is a long-standing disagreement over whether the principal purpose of incarceration should be to punish wrongdoers or to reform them so that they may reintegrate into society."
Intro hoàn chỉnh · Hook + 2 views + Thesis · 58 từ
IntroThere is a long-standing disagreement over whether the principal purpose of incarceration should be to punish wrongdoers or to reform them so that they may reintegrate into society. Advocates of the punitive approach emphasise deterrence and justice, whereas supporters of rehabilitation prioritise long-term crime reduction. This essay will weigh both stances and will argue that rehabilitation, though slower to bear fruit, is ultimately the more pragmatic strategy.
Cụm "though slower to bear fruit" là concession — thừa nhận yếu điểm view B trước khi defend, tăng tính cogent.
Step 3 · Body 1 · View A · punishment · 6 phút
Body 1Advocates of the punitive approach contend that harsh sentences serve two indispensable functions: they deter potential offenders and they deliver justice to victims. Under this view, knowing that serious wrongdoing carries serious consequences discourages people from breaking the law in the first place. Singapore is frequently held up as a case in point: its strict sentencing, including custodial terms for offences considered minor in many Western countries, is widely credited with producing one of the lowest urban crime rates in the world. Furthermore, proponents argue that victims and their families derive a sense of moral closure from seeing offenders adequately punished, an emotional need the justice system arguably ought to recognise.
Step 4 · Body 2 · View B + opinion lean B · 6 phút
Body 2Supporters of rehabilitation, by contrast, maintain that a justice system built on punishment alone tends to produce repeat offenders, since prison without education or therapy can entrench rather than reverse criminal habits. They contend that genuine public safety is achieved when prisoners leave better equipped to live lawful lives. Norway's Halden Prison illustrates this philosophy: inmates receive vocational training and counselling within a humane environment, and the country's recidivism rate of roughly twenty percent compares strikingly with the sixty-percent figure recorded in much of the United States. On balance, I find this argument more persuasive, because what ultimately protects citizens is not the severity of a sentence but the likelihood that a former prisoner will not strike again.
Sample Essay · Band 6.5 · 275 words
IntroThere is a long-standing disagreement over whether the principal purpose of incarceration should be to punish wrongdoers or to reform them so that they may reintegrate into society. Advocates of the punitive approach emphasise deterrence and justice, whereas supporters of rehabilitation prioritise long-term crime reduction. This essay will weigh both stances and will argue that rehabilitation, though slower to bear fruit, is ultimately the more pragmatic strategy.
Body 1Advocates of the punitive approach contend that harsh sentences serve two indispensable functions: they deter potential offenders and they deliver justice to victims. Knowing that serious wrongdoing carries serious consequences discourages people from breaking the law. Singapore is frequently held up as a case in point: its strict sentencing is widely credited with producing one of the lowest urban crime rates in the world. Proponents also argue that victims and their families derive a sense of moral closure from seeing offenders adequately punished.
Body 2Supporters of rehabilitation, by contrast, maintain that a justice system built on punishment alone tends to produce repeat offenders, since prison without education or therapy can entrench rather than reverse criminal habits. Genuine public safety, they contend, is achieved when prisoners leave better equipped to live lawful lives. Norway's Halden Prison illustrates this: inmates receive vocational training within a humane environment, and the country's recidivism rate of roughly twenty percent compares strikingly with the sixty-percent figure recorded in much of the United States. On balance, I find this argument more persuasive, because what ultimately protects citizens is not the severity of a sentence but the likelihood that a former prisoner will not strike again.
ConclusionIn conclusion, while punishment satisfies an understandable demand for justice, rehabilitation produces measurably safer societies. The most defensible prison system, in my view, treats reform — not retribution — as its central mission.
Language analysis · Discussion · lean B
Pattern "though slower to bear fruit, is ultimately the more pragmatic" là concession + assertion — học một lần, dùng cho mọi đề Discussion lean B.
Vocabulary & Paraphrase · Crime
Practice 03 · Globalisation
Task · Discussion · Globalisation & culture
"Some people believe that globalisation has fostered greater cultural exchange and economic progress, while others argue that it has eroded local traditions and identities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion."
Source · Recurring 2024-2025 topic
Đây là đề balanced hợp lý vì 2 view đều có evidence mạnh — không nên ép "lean" giả tạo. Stance balanced phải nói rõ "depend on what" (chính sách, mức độ).
Step 1 · Plan two views + balanced stance · 5 phút
Reason: Open trade nâng GDP các nước đang phát triển; người dân tiếp cận đa văn hoá qua internet.
Example: Việt Nam GDP tăng 7-8x từ 1990 sau Đổi mới + WTO 2007; K-pop, anime, Hollywood phổ biến toàn cầu.
Reason: Cultural homogenisation — global brands lấn át; thế hệ trẻ "Anglo-hoá", quên ngôn ngữ và phong tục.
Example: UNESCO ước tính ~40% ngôn ngữ thế giới có nguy cơ tuyệt chủng; high-street toàn cầu giống nhau.
Opinion balanced (cuối Body 2): Cả 2 view đều có cơ sở; kết quả phụ thuộc chính sách văn hoá địa phương — không phải globalisation tự nó tốt hay xấu.
Step 2 · Paraphrase + announce 2 views + balanced thesis · 5 phút
Câu đề gốc
"Globalisation has fostered greater cultural exchange and economic progress, while others argue it has eroded local traditions and identities…"
Paraphrased · Band 6.5
"Globalisation is widely portrayed as either a force of economic and cultural enrichment or a corrosive influence that flattens local distinctiveness."
Intro hoàn chỉnh · Hook + 2 views + balanced thesis · 60 từ
IntroGlobalisation is widely portrayed as either a force of economic and cultural enrichment or a corrosive influence that flattens local distinctiveness. Advocates point to rising prosperity and the cross-pollination of ideas, whereas critics warn of vanishing traditions and homogenised lifestyles. This essay will examine both perspectives and will argue that each contains substantial truth, with the net outcome depending heavily on how local communities choose to respond.
Balanced thesis phải nêu điều kiện ("depending heavily on…") — không được trống không "it depends".
Step 3 · Body 1 · View A · progress · 6 phút
Body 1Proponents of globalisation argue that the opening of borders has produced unprecedented prosperity and a rich exchange of cultural goods. Liberalised trade has lifted hundreds of millions out of poverty, while digital connectivity allows young people across continents to share music, cinema and ideas almost instantaneously. Vietnam offers a striking illustration: since the Đổi Mới reforms and subsequent WTO accession in 2007, the country's gross domestic product has risen roughly sevenfold, and its cities now host international festivals, foreign cuisines and creative scenes that would have been unimaginable a generation earlier. From this standpoint, globalisation is less a threat than an opportunity, expanding both wallets and horizons.
Step 4 · Body 2 · View B + balanced opinion · 6 phút
Body 2Critics, however, contend that the same forces have flattened cultural diversity and threatened minority languages, customs and craftsmanship. When global brands dominate high streets and English-language entertainment saturates screens, younger generations can grow up more fluent in international pop culture than in their own ancestral traditions. UNESCO estimates that around forty percent of the world's languages are now endangered, a trend that several scholars attribute in part to the dominance of a small number of global tongues. On balance, I find both arguments compelling: globalisation undeniably brings material gains and intellectual exchange, yet it can dilute identity unless local cultures are actively preserved through education, media and policy.
Sample Essay · Band 6.5 · 270 words
IntroGlobalisation is widely portrayed as either a force of economic and cultural enrichment or a corrosive influence that flattens local distinctiveness. Advocates point to rising prosperity and the cross-pollination of ideas, whereas critics warn of vanishing traditions and homogenised lifestyles. This essay will examine both perspectives and will argue that each contains substantial truth, with the net outcome depending heavily on how local communities choose to respond.
Body 1Proponents of globalisation argue that the opening of borders has produced unprecedented prosperity and a rich exchange of cultural goods. Liberalised trade has lifted hundreds of millions out of poverty, while digital connectivity allows young people across continents to share music, cinema and ideas almost instantaneously. Vietnam offers a striking illustration: since the Đổi Mới reforms and subsequent WTO accession in 2007, the country's gross domestic product has risen roughly sevenfold, and its cities now host international festivals, foreign cuisines and creative scenes that would have been unimaginable a generation earlier.
Body 2Critics, however, contend that the same forces have flattened cultural diversity and threatened minority languages, customs and craftsmanship. When global brands dominate high streets and English-language entertainment saturates screens, younger generations can grow up more fluent in international pop culture than in their own ancestral traditions. UNESCO estimates that around forty percent of the world's languages are now endangered, a trend several scholars attribute partly to the dominance of a small number of global tongues. On balance, I find both arguments compelling: globalisation undeniably brings material gains, yet it can dilute identity unless local cultures are actively preserved through education, media and policy.
ConclusionIn conclusion, globalisation is neither a uniform blessing nor an unqualified threat. Its impact, in my view, hinges less on the process itself than on whether each society treats its heritage as worth defending alongside the rewards of openness.
Language analysis · Discussion · balanced
Pattern balanced "neither X nor Y… its impact hinges less on… than on…" — cấu trúc parallel band 7+ cho Conclusion balanced.
Vocabulary & Paraphrase · Globalisation
Practice 04 · Family
Task · Discussion · Family structure
"Some people believe that children grow up better in extended families with grandparents and relatives nearby, while others think the nuclear family is more suitable for modern life. Discuss both views and give your own opinion."
Source · Common 2024 topic
Đề "more suitable for modern life" — gợi ý view B (nuclear) gắn với "modern". Lean A phải phản biện được điểm "modern life" này (gợi ý: extended family vẫn flexible nhờ công nghệ).
Step 1 · Plan two views + stance · 5 phút
Reason: Truyền thống + chia sẻ chăm sóc — trẻ học từ nhiều thế hệ; cha mẹ đỡ áp lực childcare.
Example: Việt Nam, Ấn Độ, Ý — ông bà chăm cháu trong khi cha mẹ làm việc; cohesion gia đình cao.
Reason: Job mobility — cha mẹ phải di chuyển; nuclear cho privacy + ít xung đột thế hệ.
Example: Đô thị Bắc Mỹ + Tây Âu — chuẩn nuclear; làm việc nhiều thành phố.
Opinion (cuối Body 2): Lean A — emotional & cultural benefits của extended outweigh practical convenience của nuclear, đặc biệt trong xã hội Á Đông.
Step 2 · Paraphrase + announce 2 views + thesis · 5 phút
Câu đề gốc
"Children grow up better in extended families with grandparents and relatives nearby, while others think the nuclear family is more suitable for modern life…"
Paraphrased · Band 6.5
"Whether children flourish more readily in households shared with grandparents and relatives, or within the tighter circle of a nuclear family, has become a familiar debate in rapidly urbanising societies."
Intro hoàn chỉnh · Hook + 2 views + Thesis · 56 từ
IntroWhether children flourish more readily in households shared with grandparents and relatives, or within the tighter circle of a nuclear family, has become a familiar debate in rapidly urbanising societies. Some praise the rich support network of the extended model, while others prefer the flexibility offered by smaller units. This essay will weigh both views and will argue that, particularly in cultures with strong intergenerational ties, the extended household remains the more nurturing environment.
Cụm "particularly in cultures with strong intergenerational ties" là scope qualifier — giúp Nhựt giữ lập trường mà không tuyệt đối hoá, tăng nuance.
Step 3 · Body 1 · View A · extended family · 6 phút
Body 1Supporters of the extended family argue that children raised alongside grandparents, aunts and uncles enjoy a deeper sense of belonging and benefit from a wider pool of caregivers. Multiple adults in the same household typically means that childcare burdens are shared, allowing parents to work without resorting to expensive nurseries. This pattern remains common in countries such as Vietnam, India and Italy, where grandparents routinely look after grandchildren during the working day and pass on language, recipes and family stories that might otherwise fade. Such intergenerational contact arguably equips children with both practical life skills and a richer cultural identity, neither of which is easily replicated in smaller households.
Step 4 · Body 2 · View B + opinion lean A · 6 phút
Body 2Conversely, advocates of the nuclear family contend that it is better suited to the demands of modern urban life, where parents frequently relocate for work and value the privacy of a smaller household. They suggest that fewer adults under one roof reduces friction between generations and gives parents clearer authority over how their children are raised. In much of North America and Western Europe, the nuclear household has long been the norm, and many families now stay connected to distant relatives through video calls rather than shared living space. While such practical advantages are real, I find the extended model more enriching overall, since the emotional and cultural inheritance that flows from daily contact with older relatives is difficult to recreate through a screen.
Sample Essay · Band 6.5 · 268 words
IntroWhether children flourish more readily in households shared with grandparents and relatives, or within the tighter circle of a nuclear family, has become a familiar debate in rapidly urbanising societies. Some praise the rich support network of the extended model, while others prefer the flexibility offered by smaller units. This essay will weigh both views and will argue that, particularly in cultures with strong intergenerational ties, the extended household remains the more nurturing environment.
Body 1Supporters of the extended family argue that children raised alongside grandparents, aunts and uncles enjoy a deeper sense of belonging and benefit from a wider pool of caregivers. Multiple adults in the same household typically means that childcare burdens are shared, allowing parents to work without resorting to expensive nurseries. This pattern remains common in countries such as Vietnam, India and Italy, where grandparents routinely look after grandchildren and pass on language, recipes and family stories that might otherwise fade. Such intergenerational contact arguably equips children with both practical life skills and a richer cultural identity.
Body 2Conversely, advocates of the nuclear family contend that it is better suited to the demands of modern urban life, where parents frequently relocate for work and value the privacy of a smaller household. They suggest that fewer adults under one roof reduces friction between generations. In much of North America and Western Europe, the nuclear household has long been the norm, and many families now stay connected to distant relatives through video calls. While such practical advantages are real, I find the extended model more enriching overall, since the emotional and cultural inheritance that flows from daily contact with older relatives is difficult to recreate through a screen.
ConclusionIn conclusion, although the nuclear family fits the mobility of modern careers, the extended household offers a depth of support and cultural transmission that, in my view, ultimately serves children's long-term wellbeing more effectively.
Language analysis · Discussion · lean A
Cấu trúc "A is difficult to recreate through B" là limit comparison — đối lập 2 phương tiện (face-to-face vs screen), band 6.5+ structure.
Vocabulary & Paraphrase · Family
Pattern Recap · 4 stances + 1 structure
| Practice | Topic | Stance | Key opinion phrase |
|---|---|---|---|
| 01 | Health — free vs paid | Lean A · government | "I find the equity case stronger, because…" |
| 02 | Crime — punish vs rehab | Lean B · rehabilitation | "On balance, I find this argument more persuasive…" |
| 03 | Globalisation — progress vs erosion | Balanced · conditional | "I find both arguments compelling… unless local cultures are preserved" |
| 04 | Family — extended vs nuclear | Lean A · extended | "While such practical advantages are real, I find the extended model more enriching…" |
Khung 4 đoạn không thay đổi giữa 4 bài — chỉ thay topic + stance + evidence. Học pattern một lần, áp dụng cho mọi đề Discussion.
Master Phrasebank · Discussion essay
Intro · 2 views + thesis
Body 1 · report view A
Body 2 · report view B + opinion
Conclusion · restate + reaffirm
Pitfalls · Top 4 mistakes
Đề có 2 view nhưng chỉ viết 1 = trừ Task Response 1 band. Body 1 view A, Body 2 view B — cân bằng độ dài.
Discussion luôn yêu cầu "give your own opinion". Opinion phải xuất hiện ở Intro thesis + câu cuối Body 2 + Conclusion. Trống = trừ TR.
Intro lean A nhưng Conclusion nói "both are equally good". Trừ CC (Coherence). Quy tắc: nhất quán suốt 4 đoạn.
Reporting verb không đa dạng → trừ Lexical Resource. Dùng phrasebank: argue · contend · maintain · suggest · point to · cite.
Homework & preview L07
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