IELTS Writing · Task 2

Discussion.
Both views weighed.

Lesson 06 · Discuss both views & give your opinion
Thông tin buổi học
Thời lượng
90 phút
Trình độ hiện tại
Band 5.5 → 6.0
Mục tiêu
Band 6.0 → 6.5
Lý thuyết
10 slide
Thực hành
4 prompts discussion
Từ vựng
32 từ · 24 collocations
Học viên · Trang Hoàng Nhựt
WelcomeAgenda

Agenda · 90 minutes

Agenda

  1. Theory.10 slide · 18 phút. Tổng quan dạng Discussion · cấu trúc 4 đoạn · stance spectrum (lean A / balanced / lean B) · phrasebank both-view · cohesion contrast · trình tự 40 phút.
  2. Practice 01 · Health — lean government.9 slide · 17 phút. Free healthcare vs paid — bài mẫu 272 từ · Band 6.5.
  3. Practice 02 · Crime — lean rehabilitation.9 slide · 17 phút. Punishment vs rehabilitation cho tội phạm · bài mẫu 275 từ · Band 6.5.
  4. Practice 03 · Globalisation — balanced.9 slide · 17 phút. Cultural exchange & progress vs erosion of local traditions · bài mẫu 270 từ · Band 6.5.
  5. Practice 04 · Family — lean extended.9 slide · 17 phút. Extended vs nuclear family cho trẻ em hiện đại · bài mẫu 268 từ · Band 6.5.
  6. Wrap-up & Homework.4 slide · 4 phút. Pattern recap · master vocab & phrasebank · pitfalls · bài về nhà · preview L07 Problem-Solution.
WelcomeObjectives

Learning Objectives

Sau 90 phút, bạn làm được năm việc.

  1. Nhận diện đề Discussion và tránh nhầm Opinion.Tín hiệu: "Discuss both views", "Some people believe X, while others think Y". KHÔNG chỉ chọn 1 phe — phải trình bày cả 2.
  2. Paraphrase đề + report cả 2 quan điểm trong Intro.Cấu trúc 3 câu: hook · báo trước 2 view · thesis nêu opinion. Câu thesis có thể "lean" hoặc "balanced".
  3. Viết Body 1 (view A) + Body 2 (view B) cân bằng.Mỗi body ~85 từ: report view + lý do hậu thuẫn + ví dụ. Body 2 kết bằng câu chốt "wins" your opinion.
  4. Dùng phrasebank reporting both-view không lặp."Proponents argue that…" · "On the other hand, critics contend that…" · "A common counter-view is that…". Mỗi đoạn dùng 1 cụm khác nhau.
  5. Thesis + Conclusion phải nhất quán opinion.Intro lean A → Conclusion phải tái khẳng định lean A. Lỗi phổ biến: Intro nói "I agree with X", Conclusion lại "It's hard to say". Trừ Task Response 1 band.
Phần I · Lý thuyếtTổng quan Discussion

Discussion · Task 2 Academic

40 phút. Hai phe. Một quan điểm rõ ràng.

Tần suất đề
~30%
Discussion là dạng phổ biến thứ 2 sau Opinion trong đề thi 2023-2025. Học vững dạng này = an toàn cho hơn 70% bài thi.
Cấu trúc
4 đoạn
Intro 55w · Body 1 view A 85w · Body 2 view B + opinion 90w · Conclusion 40w.
Sai phổ biến
3
Chỉ trình bày 1 phe · không nêu opinion · viết Body 1+2 quá lệch (90w vs 60w) → giám khảo trừ TR và CC.

Đề thực tế Cambridge IELTS 17-19: 12/16 đề Task 2 là Opinion hoặc Discussion. Nhựt nắm 2 dạng này = chuẩn bị đủ 75% kỳ thi.

Phần I · Lý thuyếtBốn dạng đề Task 2

Four Question Types · Task 2 Academic

Bốn dạng đề — Discussion là trọng tâm hôm nay.

TYPE 01
Opinion
"To what extent do you agree or disagree?"

Đã học L05. Đưa 1 quan điểm, bảo vệ bằng 2 reason.
TYPE 02
Discussion
"Discuss both views and give your own opinion."

Focus L06 hôm nay. Trình bày cả 2 view + nêu lập trường cá nhân.
TYPE 03
Problem–Solution
"What are the causes and what solutions can be suggested?"

2 đoạn: causes + solutions. L07.
TYPE 04
Two-part
2 câu hỏi tách rời, ví dụ: "Why is this? Is it positive or negative?"

Mỗi body trả lời 1 câu. L08.

Tín hiệu nhận diện Discussion: "Some people believe X, while others think Y. Discuss both views" — chữ "both" là khoá. Nếu thiếu chữ "both", có thể là Opinion lite.

Phần I · Lý thuyếtCấu trúc 4 đoạn

Four-paragraph structure · Discussion essay

Bốn đoạn — view A · view B · opinion.

~55w
PARA 01
Introduction
Paraphrase (1 câu) + báo trước 2 view (1 câu) + thesis nêu opinion (1 câu lean A / balanced / lean B).
~85w
PARA 02
Body 1 · View A
Topic sentence report view A. 2 lý do hậu thuẫn view A. Có ví dụ cụ thể. Tone trung tính, "they argue", chưa nêu opinion.
~90w
PARA 03
Body 2 · View B + opinion
Report view B + lý do + ví dụ. Câu cuối "wins" opinion: "While both arguments have merit, I find view A more convincing because…".
~40w
PARA 04
Conclusion
Restate cả 2 view (1 câu) + tái khẳng định opinion (1 câu). Không đưa ý mới, không đổi opinion.

Tỷ lệ vàng Discussion: 20% / 31% / 33% / 16%. Body 2 dài hơn Body 1 vì còn chứa opinion. Không viết Body 3.

Phần I · Lý thuyếtStance · thesis spectrum

Stance spectrum · Three positions

Ba lập trường — ba pattern thesis.

01 · Lean View A
"While both perspectives carry weight, this essay will argue that view A is the more compelling."
Variants: I find the first argument more persuasive · The case for A ultimately outweighs that of B.
02 · Balanced / Conditional
"Although each view has clear merit, the strength of either depends largely on context."
Variants: Both positions hold validity, yet they apply in different scenarios · Neither view is wholly correct.
03 · Lean View B
"While the first view has historical appeal, this essay will defend the second as more reflective of modern realities."
Variants: The second perspective is, in my view, more pragmatic · I am persuaded by the latter argument.

Quy tắc vàng Discussion: thesis = câu cuối Intro. Phải nêu lập trường rõ ràng — KHÔNG "it depends" trống không. Balanced ≠ trung lập; vẫn phải nói "depend on what".

Phần I · Lý thuyếtTopic sentence + PEEL

Topic Sentence + PEEL · Discussion body framework

PEEL — khung 4 bước, tone "report" cho Body 1.

StageFunctionExample phrase (Discussion)
P · PointTopic sentence — report view (Body 1 trung tính, Body 2 + opinion ở cuối)Body 1: "Proponents of X argue that…" / Body 2: "On the other hand, supporters of Y contend that…"
E · EvidenceVí dụ cụ thể hậu thuẫn view đang trình bày"A frequently cited example is the case of…" / "Recent OECD data shows that…"
E · ExplainGiải thích cơ chế nhân-quả vì sao evidence hậu thuẫn view"This demonstrates that …" / "Such a pattern reflects …"
L · LinkBody 1: link sang Body 2 trung tính. Body 2: link sang opinion câu chốt.Body 1: "Despite this, the opposing view also merits attention." / Body 2 (opinion): "On balance, the first argument strikes me as more convincing because…"

Khác Opinion essay: Body 1 KHÔNG nêu opinion. Tone trung tính "they argue / proponents say". Opinion chỉ xuất hiện ở câu cuối Body 2.

Phần I · Lý thuyếtPhrasebank · Reporting + Contrast

Reporting Phrasebank · Discussion specific

Hai phrasebank — reporting + contrast.

Reporting view

"Họ lập luận rằng…"

  • Body 1 mở: Proponents of X argue that · Supporters of this view maintain that · Those in favour contend that
  • Body 2 mở: Conversely, critics of X believe that · Opponents counter that · A frequently voiced counter-argument is that
  • Hậu thuẫn evidence: A case in point is · This is borne out by · Empirical research lends weight to this claim
  • Đưa opinion (Body 2 cuối): On balance · Personally, I am persuaded by · The weight of evidence, in my view

Contrast & balance

Contrast markers

  • Trái chiều: However · On the other hand · By contrast · Conversely · Yet
  • Nhường bộ: While X is true, Y · Although there is merit in X, Y · Granted that X, nonetheless Y
  • Cân bằng: Both arguments hold merit · Each view has its appeal · Neither position is wholly mistaken
  • Hedging opinion: I tend to side with · I find … more compelling · I lean towards the view that

Tránh "I think" lặp lại 3+ lần. Discussion đặc biệt cần phrasebank này vì có 2 view phải report — 1 từ "argue" lặp 4 lần = giám khảo trừ Lexical Resource.

Phần I · Lý thuyếtTrình tự 40 phút

Exam Sequence · 40-minute budget

40 phút — 5 bước cố định.

  1. Phân tích đề (3 phút).Xác định: topic · view A · view B · question type. Đề Discussion luôn có "Some people believe X, while others think Y". Gạch chân 2 view.
  2. Lên dàn ý — 2 view + opinion (5 phút).Brainstorm 2 reason + 1 example cho mỗi view. Chọn stance (lean A / balanced / lean B) — chọn phía bạn có nhiều example hơn.
  3. Viết Intro + Body 1 (12 phút).Intro ~55 từ: paraphrase + báo trước 2 view + thesis. Body 1 ~85 từ: PEEL view A, tone trung tính "proponents argue".
  4. Viết Body 2 + Conclusion (15 phút).Body 2 ~90 từ: PEEL view B + câu chốt nêu opinion. Conclusion ~40 từ: restate 2 view + tái khẳng định opinion. Không thêm ý mới.
  5. Check (5 phút).Cả 2 view có cân bằng? · Opinion có nhất quán Intro ↔ Conclusion? · Reporting verbs có lặp không? · ≥ 250 từ.
Practice · 01
01
Health · Lean Government

Practice 01 · Health

Healthcare.
Free or
paid?

01 · Health — lean government
02 · Crime — lean rehabilitation
03 · Globalisation — balanced
04 · Family — lean extended
Practice 01 · HealthĐề bài + phân tích

Task · Discussion · Healthcare funding

Prompt · IELTS Task 2

"Some people believe that healthcare should be provided free of charge by the government, while others argue that individuals should be responsible for paying for their own medical treatment. Discuss both views and give your own opinion."

Source · Common exam topic 2023-2024

Phân tích 4 câu hỏi

Q1
Topic?
Public health policy · funding models · social vs individual responsibility
Q2
View A?
Government-funded — universal, free at point of use
Q3
View B?
User-paid — individual financial responsibility
Q4
My stance?
Lean A (government) — equity argument mạnh hơn

Gạch chân: healthcare · free of charge · government · individuals · responsible · paying. 6 từ khoá phải xuất hiện (paraphrased) trong Intro.

Practice 01 · HealthBước 1 · Lên dàn ý

Step 1 · Plan two views + stance · 5 phút

Dàn ý — view A · view B · lean A.

View A · Body 1 · Government-funded

Healthcare là quyền cơ bản, nhà nước phải tài trợ

Reason: Equity — đảm bảo ai cũng được khám bệnh không phụ thuộc thu nhập.

Example: UK NHS, Canada Medicare — bao phủ toàn dân, life expectancy cao.

View B · Body 2 · User-paid

Người dùng tự trả → tăng trách nhiệm cá nhân + chất lượng dịch vụ

Reason: Free-rider problem — miễn phí dễ lạm dụng; thị trường tạo cạnh tranh.

Example: Singapore co-payment model — cân bằng giữa subsidies và personal stake.

Opinion (cuối Body 2): Lean A — equity argument vượt trội vì healthcare khác hàng hoá thông thường (life-or-death, info asymmetry).

Practice 01 · HealthBước 2 · Intro + Thesis

Step 2 · Paraphrase + announce 2 views + thesis · 5 phút

Mở bài — paraphrase + 2 view + lean A.

Câu đề gốc

"Healthcare should be provided free of charge by the government, while others argue that individuals should be responsible for paying…"

Paraphrased · Band 6.5

"Whether the state ought to bear the cost of medical care or whether such expenses should rest on the individual is a debate that divides modern societies."

Intro hoàn chỉnh · Hook + 2 views + Thesis · 56 từ

IntroWhether the state ought to bear the cost of medical care or whether such expenses should rest on the individual is a debate that divides modern societies. Proponents of universal coverage cite fairness, while supporters of private funding emphasise efficiency. This essay will examine both positions and will argue that government-funded healthcare is, on balance, the more justifiable model.

Cấu trúc 3 câu: hook + 2 view (1 câu) + thesis lean A (1 câu). KHÔNG đẩy thesis sang Body 2 — phải xuất hiện ở Intro.

Practice 01 · HealthBước 3 · Body 1 · View A

Step 3 · Body 1 · View A · government-funded · 6 phút

Body 1 — view A: equity argument.

Body 1Proponents of state-funded healthcare argue that medical treatment is a fundamental right rather than a commodity, and therefore should be detached from a patient's ability to pay. Under this view, allowing the market to allocate care would leave low-income groups dangerously exposed, since serious illness rarely waits for one's salary to accommodate it. A frequently cited example is the United Kingdom's National Health Service, which provides cradle-to-grave coverage without charging at the point of use. This system, despite recent strain, has helped sustain one of the highest life-expectancy figures in Europe. Such evidence lends weight to the claim that universal access is both ethically defensible and demographically effective.

Practice 01 · HealthBước 4 · Body 2 · View B + opinion

Step 4 · Body 2 · View B + opinion lean A · 6 phút

Body 2 — view B + opinion câu cuối.

Body 2On the other hand, supporters of user-paid systems contend that personal financial responsibility curbs over-use and rewards healthier lifestyles. They point to the so-called free-rider problem: when treatment is free, patients may consult doctors over trivial complaints, lengthening waiting lists for the genuinely sick. Singapore's hybrid co-payment model — where citizens contribute through Medisave accounts while the state subsidises catastrophic costs — is often cited as proof that mixed funding yields both efficiency and discipline. While this argument has practical force, I find the equity case stronger, because illness is rarely a matter of personal choice and an individual's life chances should not be auctioned to the highest bidder.

Practice 01 · HealthBài mẫu hoàn chỉnh

Sample Essay · Band 6.5 · 272 words

Bài mẫu — ghép 4 đoạn.

IntroWhether the state ought to bear the cost of medical care or whether such expenses should rest on the individual is a debate that divides modern societies. Proponents of universal coverage cite fairness, while supporters of private funding emphasise efficiency. This essay will examine both positions and will argue that government-funded healthcare is, on balance, the more justifiable model.

Body 1Proponents of state-funded healthcare argue that medical treatment is a fundamental right rather than a commodity, and therefore should be detached from a patient's ability to pay. Under this view, allowing the market to allocate care would leave low-income groups dangerously exposed, since serious illness rarely waits for one's salary to accommodate it. A frequently cited example is the United Kingdom's National Health Service, which provides cradle-to-grave coverage without charging at the point of use. This system, despite recent strain, has helped sustain one of the highest life-expectancy figures in Europe. Such evidence lends weight to the claim that universal access is both ethically defensible and demographically effective.

Body 2On the other hand, supporters of user-paid systems contend that personal financial responsibility curbs over-use and rewards healthier lifestyles. They point to the so-called free-rider problem: when treatment is free, patients may consult doctors over trivial complaints. Singapore's hybrid co-payment model — where citizens contribute through Medisave accounts while the state subsidises catastrophic costs — is often cited as proof that mixed funding yields both efficiency and discipline. While this argument has practical force, I find the equity case stronger, because illness is rarely a matter of personal choice and an individual's life chances should not be auctioned to the highest bidder.

ConclusionIn conclusion, although the user-paid model carries real efficiency benefits, the moral weight of universal access prevails. Healthcare, in my view, belongs in the category of public goods that no decent society should ration by wallet.

Practice 01 · HealthPhân tích ngôn ngữ

Language analysis · Discussion · lean A

Bốn kỹ thuật — tháo từ bài Health.

Cấu trúc "X is a debate that divides modern societies" là template hook mở bài hữu dụng cho mọi đề Discussion — học một lần, dùng nhiều dạng.

Practice 01 · HealthTừ vựng + paraphrase

Vocabulary & Paraphrase · Health

Tám từ · sáu paraphrase — healthcare.

Vocabulary (8)
universal coverage (n.) /ˌjuːnɪˈvɜːsl ˈkʌvərɪdʒ/
bảo hiểm toàn dân — provide universal coverage
equity (n.) /ˈekwəti/
sự công bằng (về cơ hội) — equity in healthcare
cradle-to-grave (adj.) /ˌkreɪdl tə ˈɡreɪv/
từ lúc sinh đến lúc mất — cradle-to-grave coverage
subsidise (v.) /ˈsʌbsɪdaɪz/
trợ giá — heavily subsidised
free-rider (n.) /friː ˈraɪdə/
người hưởng lợi không trả — free-rider problem
commodity (n.) /kəˈmɒdəti/
hàng hoá thông thường — treat health as a commodity
co-payment (n.) /ˈkəʊˌpeɪmənt/
đồng chi trả — co-payment model
life expectancy (n.) /laɪf ɪkˈspektənsi/
tuổi thọ trung bình — raise life expectancy
Paraphrase pairs (6)
healthcare should be free→ medical care ought to be state-funded · treatment should be free at the point of use
provided by the government→ state-funded · publicly funded · borne by the state
individuals should pay→ patients should bear the cost · personal financial responsibility · user-paid model
it is a basic right→ a fundamental right · ethically indispensable · a public good
people who can't afford→ low-income groups · those with limited means · the economically vulnerable
I agree with view A→ I find the equity case stronger · the moral weight of universal access prevails · I lean towards the first view
Practice · 02
02
Crime · Lean Rehabilitation

Practice 02 · Crime

Prisons.
Punish or
reform?

01 · Health — lean government
02 · Crime — lean rehabilitation
03 · Globalisation — balanced
04 · Family — lean extended
Practice 02 · CrimeĐề bài + phân tích

Task · Discussion · Prisons & rehabilitation

Prompt · IELTS Task 2

"Some people argue that the main aim of prisons should be to punish offenders, while others believe rehabilitation is more effective in reducing future crime. Discuss both views and give your own opinion."

Source · Cambridge IELTS 18 · variant

Phân tích 4 câu hỏi

Q1
Topic?
Criminal justice · prison philosophy · recidivism
Q2
View A?
Punishment — deterrence + retribution
Q3
View B?
Rehabilitation — reduce reoffending, reintegrate
Q4
My stance?
Lean B (rehabilitation) — bằng chứng dài hạn mạnh hơn

Đề có cụm "more effective in reducing future crime" — gợi ý measurable outcome → cần đem evidence định lượng (recidivism rate) khi report view B.

Practice 02 · CrimeBước 1 · Lên dàn ý

Step 1 · Plan two views + stance · 5 phút

Dàn ý — view A · view B · lean B.

View A · Body 1 · Punishment

Mục tiêu nhà tù là trừng phạt — răn đe + công lý cho nạn nhân

Reason: Deterrence — án nặng làm người khác sợ phạm tội; nạn nhân cần thấy công lý được thực thi.

Example: Singapore's strict sentencing → tỷ lệ tội phạm thấp; nạn nhân được "moral closure".

View B · Body 2 · Rehabilitation

Cải tạo giảm tái phạm — bảo vệ xã hội bền vững hơn

Reason: Recidivism — nhà tù trừng phạt thuần tuý tạo "trường đại học tội phạm"; cải tạo phá vòng lặp.

Example: Norway's Halden Prison — recidivism ~20% (so với US 60%), tù nhân học nghề.

Opinion (cuối Body 2): Lean B — measurable outcome (recidivism) rõ ràng hơn argument cảm tính về công lý; xã hội an toàn hơn về dài hạn.

Practice 02 · CrimeBước 2 · Intro + Thesis

Step 2 · Paraphrase + announce 2 views + thesis · 5 phút

Mở bài — paraphrase + 2 view + lean B.

Câu đề gốc

"Some argue the main aim of prisons should be to punish offenders, while others believe rehabilitation is more effective…"

Paraphrased · Band 6.5

"There is a long-standing disagreement over whether the principal purpose of incarceration should be to punish wrongdoers or to reform them so that they may reintegrate into society."

Intro hoàn chỉnh · Hook + 2 views + Thesis · 58 từ

IntroThere is a long-standing disagreement over whether the principal purpose of incarceration should be to punish wrongdoers or to reform them so that they may reintegrate into society. Advocates of the punitive approach emphasise deterrence and justice, whereas supporters of rehabilitation prioritise long-term crime reduction. This essay will weigh both stances and will argue that rehabilitation, though slower to bear fruit, is ultimately the more pragmatic strategy.

Cụm "though slower to bear fruit" là concession — thừa nhận yếu điểm view B trước khi defend, tăng tính cogent.

Practice 02 · CrimeBước 3 · Body 1 · View A

Step 3 · Body 1 · View A · punishment · 6 phút

Body 1 — view A: deterrence + justice.

Body 1Advocates of the punitive approach contend that harsh sentences serve two indispensable functions: they deter potential offenders and they deliver justice to victims. Under this view, knowing that serious wrongdoing carries serious consequences discourages people from breaking the law in the first place. Singapore is frequently held up as a case in point: its strict sentencing, including custodial terms for offences considered minor in many Western countries, is widely credited with producing one of the lowest urban crime rates in the world. Furthermore, proponents argue that victims and their families derive a sense of moral closure from seeing offenders adequately punished, an emotional need the justice system arguably ought to recognise.

Practice 02 · CrimeBước 4 · Body 2 · View B + opinion

Step 4 · Body 2 · View B + opinion lean B · 6 phút

Body 2 — view B + opinion câu cuối.

Body 2Supporters of rehabilitation, by contrast, maintain that a justice system built on punishment alone tends to produce repeat offenders, since prison without education or therapy can entrench rather than reverse criminal habits. They contend that genuine public safety is achieved when prisoners leave better equipped to live lawful lives. Norway's Halden Prison illustrates this philosophy: inmates receive vocational training and counselling within a humane environment, and the country's recidivism rate of roughly twenty percent compares strikingly with the sixty-percent figure recorded in much of the United States. On balance, I find this argument more persuasive, because what ultimately protects citizens is not the severity of a sentence but the likelihood that a former prisoner will not strike again.

Practice 02 · CrimeBài mẫu hoàn chỉnh

Sample Essay · Band 6.5 · 275 words

Bài mẫu — ghép 4 đoạn.

IntroThere is a long-standing disagreement over whether the principal purpose of incarceration should be to punish wrongdoers or to reform them so that they may reintegrate into society. Advocates of the punitive approach emphasise deterrence and justice, whereas supporters of rehabilitation prioritise long-term crime reduction. This essay will weigh both stances and will argue that rehabilitation, though slower to bear fruit, is ultimately the more pragmatic strategy.

Body 1Advocates of the punitive approach contend that harsh sentences serve two indispensable functions: they deter potential offenders and they deliver justice to victims. Knowing that serious wrongdoing carries serious consequences discourages people from breaking the law. Singapore is frequently held up as a case in point: its strict sentencing is widely credited with producing one of the lowest urban crime rates in the world. Proponents also argue that victims and their families derive a sense of moral closure from seeing offenders adequately punished.

Body 2Supporters of rehabilitation, by contrast, maintain that a justice system built on punishment alone tends to produce repeat offenders, since prison without education or therapy can entrench rather than reverse criminal habits. Genuine public safety, they contend, is achieved when prisoners leave better equipped to live lawful lives. Norway's Halden Prison illustrates this: inmates receive vocational training within a humane environment, and the country's recidivism rate of roughly twenty percent compares strikingly with the sixty-percent figure recorded in much of the United States. On balance, I find this argument more persuasive, because what ultimately protects citizens is not the severity of a sentence but the likelihood that a former prisoner will not strike again.

ConclusionIn conclusion, while punishment satisfies an understandable demand for justice, rehabilitation produces measurably safer societies. The most defensible prison system, in my view, treats reform — not retribution — as its central mission.

Practice 02 · CrimePhân tích ngôn ngữ

Language analysis · Discussion · lean B

Bốn kỹ thuật — tháo từ bài Crime.

Pattern "though slower to bear fruit, is ultimately the more pragmatic" là concession + assertion — học một lần, dùng cho mọi đề Discussion lean B.

Practice 02 · CrimeTừ vựng + paraphrase

Vocabulary & Paraphrase · Crime

Tám từ · sáu paraphrase — prisons.

Vocabulary (8)
incarceration (n.) /ɪnˌkɑːsəˈreɪʃn/
việc bỏ tù — long-term incarceration
deterrence (n.) /dɪˈterəns/
sự răn đe — act as a deterrence
rehabilitation (n.) /ˌriːəˌbɪlɪˈteɪʃn/
cải tạo, phục hồi — undergo rehabilitation
recidivism (n.) /rɪˈsɪdɪvɪzəm/
tỷ lệ tái phạm — reduce recidivism
offender (n.) /əˈfendə/
người phạm tội — first-time offender
reintegrate (v.) /ˌriːˈɪntɪɡreɪt/
tái hoà nhập — reintegrate into society
custodial (adj.) /kʌˈstəʊdiəl/
giam giữ — custodial sentence
retribution (n.) /ˌretrɪˈbjuːʃn/
sự trừng phạt (mang nghĩa "đền tội") — seek retribution
Paraphrase pairs (6)
prisons should punish offenders→ incarceration ought to punish wrongdoers · the punitive approach to imprisonment
main aim / purpose→ principal purpose · central mission · primary function
rehabilitation is more effective→ reform produces measurably safer societies · cải tạo yields better long-term outcomes
reduce future crime→ lower recidivism · curb reoffending · achieve genuine public safety
harsh sentences→ strict sentencing · punitive measures · custodial terms
I think view B is better→ I find this argument more persuasive · On balance, rehabilitation prevails · I lean towards the second view
Practice · 03
03
Globalisation · Balanced

Practice 03 · Globalisation

Globalisation.
Progress or
erosion?

01 · Health — lean government
02 · Crime — lean rehabilitation
03 · Globalisation — balanced
04 · Family — lean extended
Practice 03 · GlobalisationĐề bài + phân tích

Task · Discussion · Globalisation & culture

Prompt · IELTS Task 2

"Some people believe that globalisation has fostered greater cultural exchange and economic progress, while others argue that it has eroded local traditions and identities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion."

Source · Recurring 2024-2025 topic

Phân tích 4 câu hỏi

Q1
Topic?
Cultural globalisation · economic integration · local heritage
Q2
View A?
Progress — exchange + economic gains
Q3
View B?
Erosion — homogenisation, loss of identity
Q4
My stance?
Balanced — cả 2 đều thật, depends on policy

Đây là đề balanced hợp lý vì 2 view đều có evidence mạnh — không nên ép "lean" giả tạo. Stance balanced phải nói rõ "depend on what" (chính sách, mức độ).

Practice 03 · GlobalisationBước 1 · Lên dàn ý

Step 1 · Plan two views + balanced stance · 5 phút

Dàn ý — view A · view B · balanced.

View A · Body 1 · Progress

Trao đổi văn hoá + thu nhập tăng, xoá nghèo cho hàng triệu người

Reason: Open trade nâng GDP các nước đang phát triển; người dân tiếp cận đa văn hoá qua internet.

Example: Việt Nam GDP tăng 7-8x từ 1990 sau Đổi mới + WTO 2007; K-pop, anime, Hollywood phổ biến toàn cầu.

View B · Body 2 · Erosion

Văn hoá địa phương mất đi — McDonald's thay quán phở; tiếng mẹ đẻ giảm

Reason: Cultural homogenisation — global brands lấn át; thế hệ trẻ "Anglo-hoá", quên ngôn ngữ và phong tục.

Example: UNESCO ước tính ~40% ngôn ngữ thế giới có nguy cơ tuyệt chủng; high-street toàn cầu giống nhau.

Opinion balanced (cuối Body 2): Cả 2 view đều có cơ sở; kết quả phụ thuộc chính sách văn hoá địa phương — không phải globalisation tự nó tốt hay xấu.

Practice 03 · GlobalisationBước 2 · Intro + Thesis

Step 2 · Paraphrase + announce 2 views + balanced thesis · 5 phút

Mở bài — paraphrase + 2 view + balanced.

Câu đề gốc

"Globalisation has fostered greater cultural exchange and economic progress, while others argue it has eroded local traditions and identities…"

Paraphrased · Band 6.5

"Globalisation is widely portrayed as either a force of economic and cultural enrichment or a corrosive influence that flattens local distinctiveness."

Intro hoàn chỉnh · Hook + 2 views + balanced thesis · 60 từ

IntroGlobalisation is widely portrayed as either a force of economic and cultural enrichment or a corrosive influence that flattens local distinctiveness. Advocates point to rising prosperity and the cross-pollination of ideas, whereas critics warn of vanishing traditions and homogenised lifestyles. This essay will examine both perspectives and will argue that each contains substantial truth, with the net outcome depending heavily on how local communities choose to respond.

Balanced thesis phải nêu điều kiện ("depending heavily on…") — không được trống không "it depends".

Practice 03 · GlobalisationBước 3 · Body 1 · View A

Step 3 · Body 1 · View A · progress · 6 phút

Body 1 — view A: prosperity + exchange.

Body 1Proponents of globalisation argue that the opening of borders has produced unprecedented prosperity and a rich exchange of cultural goods. Liberalised trade has lifted hundreds of millions out of poverty, while digital connectivity allows young people across continents to share music, cinema and ideas almost instantaneously. Vietnam offers a striking illustration: since the Đổi Mới reforms and subsequent WTO accession in 2007, the country's gross domestic product has risen roughly sevenfold, and its cities now host international festivals, foreign cuisines and creative scenes that would have been unimaginable a generation earlier. From this standpoint, globalisation is less a threat than an opportunity, expanding both wallets and horizons.

Practice 03 · GlobalisationBước 4 · Body 2 · View B + opinion

Step 4 · Body 2 · View B + balanced opinion · 6 phút

Body 2 — view B + balanced opinion.

Body 2Critics, however, contend that the same forces have flattened cultural diversity and threatened minority languages, customs and craftsmanship. When global brands dominate high streets and English-language entertainment saturates screens, younger generations can grow up more fluent in international pop culture than in their own ancestral traditions. UNESCO estimates that around forty percent of the world's languages are now endangered, a trend that several scholars attribute in part to the dominance of a small number of global tongues. On balance, I find both arguments compelling: globalisation undeniably brings material gains and intellectual exchange, yet it can dilute identity unless local cultures are actively preserved through education, media and policy.

Practice 03 · GlobalisationBài mẫu hoàn chỉnh

Sample Essay · Band 6.5 · 270 words

Bài mẫu — ghép 4 đoạn.

IntroGlobalisation is widely portrayed as either a force of economic and cultural enrichment or a corrosive influence that flattens local distinctiveness. Advocates point to rising prosperity and the cross-pollination of ideas, whereas critics warn of vanishing traditions and homogenised lifestyles. This essay will examine both perspectives and will argue that each contains substantial truth, with the net outcome depending heavily on how local communities choose to respond.

Body 1Proponents of globalisation argue that the opening of borders has produced unprecedented prosperity and a rich exchange of cultural goods. Liberalised trade has lifted hundreds of millions out of poverty, while digital connectivity allows young people across continents to share music, cinema and ideas almost instantaneously. Vietnam offers a striking illustration: since the Đổi Mới reforms and subsequent WTO accession in 2007, the country's gross domestic product has risen roughly sevenfold, and its cities now host international festivals, foreign cuisines and creative scenes that would have been unimaginable a generation earlier.

Body 2Critics, however, contend that the same forces have flattened cultural diversity and threatened minority languages, customs and craftsmanship. When global brands dominate high streets and English-language entertainment saturates screens, younger generations can grow up more fluent in international pop culture than in their own ancestral traditions. UNESCO estimates that around forty percent of the world's languages are now endangered, a trend several scholars attribute partly to the dominance of a small number of global tongues. On balance, I find both arguments compelling: globalisation undeniably brings material gains, yet it can dilute identity unless local cultures are actively preserved through education, media and policy.

ConclusionIn conclusion, globalisation is neither a uniform blessing nor an unqualified threat. Its impact, in my view, hinges less on the process itself than on whether each society treats its heritage as worth defending alongside the rewards of openness.

Practice 03 · GlobalisationPhân tích ngôn ngữ

Language analysis · Discussion · balanced

Bốn kỹ thuật — tháo từ bài Globalisation.

Pattern balanced "neither X nor Y… its impact hinges less on… than on…" — cấu trúc parallel band 7+ cho Conclusion balanced.

Practice 03 · GlobalisationTừ vựng + paraphrase

Vocabulary & Paraphrase · Globalisation

Tám từ · sáu paraphrase — globalisation.

Vocabulary (8)
homogenisation (n.) /həˌmɒdʒənaɪˈzeɪʃn/
sự đồng nhất hoá — cultural homogenisation
cross-pollination (n.) /krɒs ˌpɒləˈneɪʃn/
giao thoa, trao đổi — cross-pollination of ideas
heritage (n.) /ˈherɪtɪdʒ/
di sản — cultural heritage
distinctiveness (n.) /dɪˈstɪŋktɪvnəs/
nét đặc trưng — local distinctiveness
corrosive (adj.) /kəˈrəʊsɪv/
làm xói mòn — corrosive influence
liberalised (adj.) /ˈlɪbərəlaɪzd/
được tự do hoá — liberalised trade
endangered (adj.) /ɪnˈdeɪndʒəd/
có nguy cơ biến mất — endangered languages
prosperity (n.) /prɒˈsperəti/
sự thịnh vượng — economic prosperity
Paraphrase pairs (6)
globalisation has brought progress→ liberalised trade has produced unprecedented prosperity · the opening of borders has yielded gains
cultural exchange→ cross-pollination of ideas · cultural cross-fertilisation · rich exchange of cultural goods
it has eroded local traditions→ it has flattened cultural diversity · it has diluted identity · it threatens minority customs
losing identity→ vanishing traditions · loss of distinctiveness · cultural homogenisation
both views are right→ each contains substantial truth · both arguments are compelling · neither perspective is wholly mistaken
it depends on the country→ the net outcome depends on how local communities respond · its impact hinges on cultural policy
Practice · 04
04
Family · Lean Extended

Practice 04 · Family

Family.
Extended or
nuclear?

01 · Health — lean government
02 · Crime — lean rehabilitation
03 · Globalisation — balanced
04 · Family — lean extended
Practice 04 · FamilyĐề bài + phân tích

Task · Discussion · Family structure

Prompt · IELTS Task 2

"Some people believe that children grow up better in extended families with grandparents and relatives nearby, while others think the nuclear family is more suitable for modern life. Discuss both views and give your own opinion."

Source · Common 2024 topic

Phân tích 4 câu hỏi

Q1
Topic?
Family structure · child development · intergenerational support
Q2
View A?
Extended family — grandparents + relatives nearby
Q3
View B?
Nuclear family — parents + children, mobile, modern
Q4
My stance?
Lean A (extended) — phù hợp Á Đông, hỗ trợ tinh thần + kinh tế

Đề "more suitable for modern life" — gợi ý view B (nuclear) gắn với "modern". Lean A phải phản biện được điểm "modern life" này (gợi ý: extended family vẫn flexible nhờ công nghệ).

Practice 04 · FamilyBước 1 · Lên dàn ý

Step 1 · Plan two views + stance · 5 phút

Dàn ý — view A · view B · lean A.

View A · Body 1 · Extended family

Ông bà + họ hàng = hỗ trợ tinh thần, văn hoá, kinh tế cho trẻ

Reason: Truyền thống + chia sẻ chăm sóc — trẻ học từ nhiều thế hệ; cha mẹ đỡ áp lực childcare.

Example: Việt Nam, Ấn Độ, Ý — ông bà chăm cháu trong khi cha mẹ làm việc; cohesion gia đình cao.

View B · Body 2 · Nuclear family

Gia đình hạt nhân phù hợp đô thị hoá + cơ động nghề nghiệp

Reason: Job mobility — cha mẹ phải di chuyển; nuclear cho privacy + ít xung đột thế hệ.

Example: Đô thị Bắc Mỹ + Tây Âu — chuẩn nuclear; làm việc nhiều thành phố.

Opinion (cuối Body 2): Lean A — emotional & cultural benefits của extended outweigh practical convenience của nuclear, đặc biệt trong xã hội Á Đông.

Practice 04 · FamilyBước 2 · Intro + Thesis

Step 2 · Paraphrase + announce 2 views + thesis · 5 phút

Mở bài — paraphrase + 2 view + lean A.

Câu đề gốc

"Children grow up better in extended families with grandparents and relatives nearby, while others think the nuclear family is more suitable for modern life…"

Paraphrased · Band 6.5

"Whether children flourish more readily in households shared with grandparents and relatives, or within the tighter circle of a nuclear family, has become a familiar debate in rapidly urbanising societies."

Intro hoàn chỉnh · Hook + 2 views + Thesis · 56 từ

IntroWhether children flourish more readily in households shared with grandparents and relatives, or within the tighter circle of a nuclear family, has become a familiar debate in rapidly urbanising societies. Some praise the rich support network of the extended model, while others prefer the flexibility offered by smaller units. This essay will weigh both views and will argue that, particularly in cultures with strong intergenerational ties, the extended household remains the more nurturing environment.

Cụm "particularly in cultures with strong intergenerational ties" là scope qualifier — giúp Nhựt giữ lập trường mà không tuyệt đối hoá, tăng nuance.

Practice 04 · FamilyBước 3 · Body 1 · View A

Step 3 · Body 1 · View A · extended family · 6 phút

Body 1 — view A: support + transmission.

Body 1Supporters of the extended family argue that children raised alongside grandparents, aunts and uncles enjoy a deeper sense of belonging and benefit from a wider pool of caregivers. Multiple adults in the same household typically means that childcare burdens are shared, allowing parents to work without resorting to expensive nurseries. This pattern remains common in countries such as Vietnam, India and Italy, where grandparents routinely look after grandchildren during the working day and pass on language, recipes and family stories that might otherwise fade. Such intergenerational contact arguably equips children with both practical life skills and a richer cultural identity, neither of which is easily replicated in smaller households.

Practice 04 · FamilyBước 4 · Body 2 · View B + opinion

Step 4 · Body 2 · View B + opinion lean A · 6 phút

Body 2 — view B + opinion câu cuối.

Body 2Conversely, advocates of the nuclear family contend that it is better suited to the demands of modern urban life, where parents frequently relocate for work and value the privacy of a smaller household. They suggest that fewer adults under one roof reduces friction between generations and gives parents clearer authority over how their children are raised. In much of North America and Western Europe, the nuclear household has long been the norm, and many families now stay connected to distant relatives through video calls rather than shared living space. While such practical advantages are real, I find the extended model more enriching overall, since the emotional and cultural inheritance that flows from daily contact with older relatives is difficult to recreate through a screen.

Practice 04 · FamilyBài mẫu hoàn chỉnh

Sample Essay · Band 6.5 · 268 words

Bài mẫu — ghép 4 đoạn.

IntroWhether children flourish more readily in households shared with grandparents and relatives, or within the tighter circle of a nuclear family, has become a familiar debate in rapidly urbanising societies. Some praise the rich support network of the extended model, while others prefer the flexibility offered by smaller units. This essay will weigh both views and will argue that, particularly in cultures with strong intergenerational ties, the extended household remains the more nurturing environment.

Body 1Supporters of the extended family argue that children raised alongside grandparents, aunts and uncles enjoy a deeper sense of belonging and benefit from a wider pool of caregivers. Multiple adults in the same household typically means that childcare burdens are shared, allowing parents to work without resorting to expensive nurseries. This pattern remains common in countries such as Vietnam, India and Italy, where grandparents routinely look after grandchildren and pass on language, recipes and family stories that might otherwise fade. Such intergenerational contact arguably equips children with both practical life skills and a richer cultural identity.

Body 2Conversely, advocates of the nuclear family contend that it is better suited to the demands of modern urban life, where parents frequently relocate for work and value the privacy of a smaller household. They suggest that fewer adults under one roof reduces friction between generations. In much of North America and Western Europe, the nuclear household has long been the norm, and many families now stay connected to distant relatives through video calls. While such practical advantages are real, I find the extended model more enriching overall, since the emotional and cultural inheritance that flows from daily contact with older relatives is difficult to recreate through a screen.

ConclusionIn conclusion, although the nuclear family fits the mobility of modern careers, the extended household offers a depth of support and cultural transmission that, in my view, ultimately serves children's long-term wellbeing more effectively.

Practice 04 · FamilyPhân tích ngôn ngữ

Language analysis · Discussion · lean A

Bốn kỹ thuật — tháo từ bài Family.

Cấu trúc "A is difficult to recreate through B" là limit comparison — đối lập 2 phương tiện (face-to-face vs screen), band 6.5+ structure.

Practice 04 · FamilyTừ vựng + paraphrase

Vocabulary & Paraphrase · Family

Tám từ · sáu paraphrase — family.

Vocabulary (8)
extended family (n.) /ɪkˈstendɪd ˈfæməli/
gia đình mở rộng — live in an extended family
nuclear family (n.) /ˈnjuːkliə ˈfæməli/
gia đình hạt nhân — the nuclear household
intergenerational (adj.) /ˌɪntəˌdʒenəˈreɪʃənl/
liên thế hệ — intergenerational ties
belonging (n.) /bɪˈlɒŋɪŋ/
sự thuộc về — a deep sense of belonging
caregiver (n.) /ˈkeəɡɪvə/
người chăm sóc — primary caregiver
relocate (v.) /ˌriːləʊˈkeɪt/
tái định cư — relocate for work
friction (n.) /ˈfrɪkʃn/
va chạm, xung đột — reduce friction between generations
inheritance (n.) /ɪnˈherɪtəns/
sự kế thừa — cultural inheritance
Paraphrase pairs (6)
children grow up better→ children flourish more readily · enjoy a deeper sense of belonging · long-term wellbeing
extended families→ households shared with grandparents and relatives · multigenerational households
nuclear family→ tighter circle of a nuclear family · smaller households · the nuclear unit
grandparents help take care→ a wider pool of caregivers · childcare burdens are shared · grandparents routinely look after grandchildren
it is better for modern life→ better suited to the demands of modern urban life · matches job mobility
I prefer extended family→ I find the extended model more enriching · the extended household remains the more nurturing environment
Wrap-upPattern recap

Pattern Recap · 4 stances + 1 structure

Bốn bài — một khung, ba lập trường.

PracticeTopicStanceKey opinion phrase
01Health — free vs paidLean A · government"I find the equity case stronger, because…"
02Crime — punish vs rehabLean B · rehabilitation"On balance, I find this argument more persuasive…"
03Globalisation — progress vs erosionBalanced · conditional"I find both arguments compelling… unless local cultures are preserved"
04Family — extended vs nuclearLean A · extended"While such practical advantages are real, I find the extended model more enriching…"

Khung 4 đoạn không thay đổi giữa 4 bài — chỉ thay topic + stance + evidence. Học pattern một lần, áp dụng cho mọi đề Discussion.

Wrap-upMaster phrasebank

Master Phrasebank · Discussion essay

Phrasebank — học thuộc 4 cụm cho mỗi giai đoạn.

Intro · 2 views + thesis

Mở bài

  • "X is a debate that divides modern societies."
  • "There is a long-standing disagreement over whether…"
  • "X is widely portrayed as either A or B."
  • "Whether children flourish in A, or within B, has become a familiar debate."

Body 1 · report view A

Mở Body 1

  • "Proponents of X argue that…"
  • "Supporters of this view contend that…"
  • "Advocates of A maintain that…"
  • "Those in favour of X point to…"

Body 2 · report view B + opinion

Mở Body 2 + chốt opinion

  • "On the other hand, supporters of B contend that…"
  • "Conversely, advocates of B maintain that…"
  • "Critics, however, argue that…"
  • Opinion: "On balance, I find… more persuasive because…"

Conclusion · restate + reaffirm

Kết bài

  • "In conclusion, while A carries real benefits, B prevails because…"
  • "In conclusion, X is neither a uniform blessing nor an unqualified threat."
  • "The most defensible position, in my view, treats Y — not Z — as central."
  • "Its impact, in my view, hinges less on X than on Y."
Wrap-upPitfalls · sai phổ biến

Pitfalls · Top 4 mistakes

Bốn lỗi — tránh là lên 1 band.

01

Chỉ trình bày 1 phe

Đề có 2 view nhưng chỉ viết 1 = trừ Task Response 1 band. Body 1 view A, Body 2 view B — cân bằng độ dài.

02

Không nêu opinion rõ ràng

Discussion luôn yêu cầu "give your own opinion". Opinion phải xuất hiện ở Intro thesis + câu cuối Body 2 + Conclusion. Trống = trừ TR.

03

Opinion mâu thuẫn Intro ↔ Conclusion

Intro lean A nhưng Conclusion nói "both are equally good". Trừ CC (Coherence). Quy tắc: nhất quán suốt 4 đoạn.

04

Lặp "say / argue / think" 5+ lần

Reporting verb không đa dạng → trừ Lexical Resource. Dùng phrasebank: argue · contend · maintain · suggest · point to · cite.

Wrap-upHomework

Homework & preview L07

Bài về nhà — hai đề Discussion.

HW 01 · Education
"Some believe university education should focus on academic subjects, while others think vocational training is more useful. Discuss both views and give your own opinion." — 270w, Band 6.5 target, nộp trước buổi sau.
HW 02 · Environment
"Some argue individuals are responsible for protecting the environment, while others believe governments should lead. Discuss both views and give your own opinion." — dùng phrasebank L06.
Self-check
Đếm reporting verbs — có ≥ 4 khác nhau? Intro & Conclusion có cùng opinion? Body 1 ≈ Body 2 độ dài?
Preview L07
Problem–Solution essay. 4 prompts: traffic, pollution, obesity, youth unemployment. Cấu trúc 2 đoạn: causes + solutions.

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